Teenage girl and woman die after group gets into difficulties in sea off Essex beach
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A teenage girl and a woman in her 40s died after a group got into difficulty in the sea at West Mersea beach in Essex. Three others from the group are hospitalized, with one in serious condition and two with non-life-threatening injuries. The group is believed to be known to each other. The incident highlights the dangers of swimming in the sea.
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Two fatalities and three hospitalizations in a single group.
A teenage girl and a woman in her 40s died after getting into difficulty in the water at an Essex beach.
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The group is believed to know each other.
The Guardian- Two fatalities and three hospitalizations in a single group.
- The group is believed to know each other, emphasizing social ties.
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Loaded language removed<p>Three others in group, believed to know each other, are in hospital after incident at West Mersea </p><p>A teenage girl and a woman in her 40s have died after several people got into difficulty in the water at an Essex beach.</p><p>A third person remains in hospital in a serious condition, and two other people are in hospital with non-life-threatening injuries, Essex police said in a statement…
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The group is believed to know each other.
The GuardianA teenage girl and a woman in her 40s died after getting into difficulty in the water at an Essex beach.
The GuardianThree others in the group are in hospital.
The GuardianOne person remains in hospital in a serious condition, and two other people are in hospital with non-life-threatening injuries.
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